QC of ep1 Round Two

edit: qc is done with :)

Soooo… there were a lot of changes you guys wanted, including some styling.

1) I changed the title styling again… look any better?
2) I redid the signs… new font and stuff. Look any better?

In terms of other notes, I did some, I didn’t do others. For a lot of the ones that I didn’t do, I left comments in the original post. If I didn’t and you want to know why, feel free to ask.

Otherwise – can anyone make chapters? I dunno how to :P

Anyways, here’s another QC. Could be an RC. Labelling it as QC cuz I need chapters and I want final opinions. Any notes should be formatted as before
00:00 – what you want to see changed

You can find the new QC file here. (right click – save target as)

17 Responses to “QC of ep1 Round Two”

  • Blah says:

    Chapters: http://www.megaupload.com/?d=QC4EBGEA (sorry, didn’t have anyplace else to upload to)

    1:57 – Consistency, change Mount -> Mt.
    2:22 – Might be better as “Wow, he’s like a Celestial!”. Don’t think there are other sorts of them. And I do think that it is capitalized.
    2:42 – I think the line starts a bit late.

    For some reason, all the lines seem to start a bit late, or that might just be me.

    • Yeah, I think the shift is a little late… but oh well. They’re close enough :-)

    • Blah says:

      Oh and I like the opening style much more now. Forgot to mention it.

    • PhantomCaller says:

      Regarding:
      “2:22 – Might be better as ‘Wow, he’s like a Celestial!’. Don’t think there are other sorts of them.” He’s not literally called a celestial, he’s called a 神人(shinjin), or “godlike man”, which is why the “some sort” is necessary as there are many types of possible godlike humans in Japanese lore.

  • First line is like WAY late

    04:04 too

    Haruhi’s count some sheep line should be the same in both instances…

  • Does anyone else think that 02:00 is like, way gay?

  • foo says:

    About fonts.. on the YouTube ones Chaparral Pro is used, and it looks better. I actually just edited the mkv to use Chaparral Pro… and it still looks good :P It’s just a bit small (I didn’t change anything else).

  • phoenix923 says:

    Aside from the stuff everyone else found that’s all I can see. And I’m with foo on the sign font. The Chaparral Pro font looks better to me.

    About my problem with the signs flashing…I was using MPC with the k-lite codec pack. And I use two computers, my home computer and my laptop. The signs for this new qc work on my home computer, witch I’m using right now. Ill see if it does that on my laptop, witch is what I was using st that time.

  • phoenix923 says:

    I don’t have a problem that much with the font you chose, it is just too big in the sign. Because the Chaparral Pro font is smaller it just looks and fits better to me.

    Oh and the sign flashing problem is something with my laptop. I’ve played the episode on multiple computers and my laptop is the only one that does it. I need to change my subtitle renderer.

    Don’t get discouraged, progress is being made and I’m extremely excited that this project has picked back up.

  • gavers says:

    shamisen, assuming you’re not visiting your mail very often, i need the next DVD. :P


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